Reviews for Smoke
Snape Fan | 2005.01.03 - 08:35AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
"Snape helpfully pointed out that she still had grey teeth and lips " People are giving me funny looks as I read through this and laugh at your funny lines. Typical Snape to bring her lemon squash! Love this story. |
Losumi | 2005.01.03 - 08:07AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
You have REALLY intrigued me. I look forward to finding out the backstory for all of this! |
aphrodeia | 2005.01.03 - 07:55AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
Who needs 'happy' when it's well-written? Hooray! Very nice. I love a good Hermione who has an ounce or three of maturity. |
June W | 2005.01.03 - 07:36AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
Sigh ... I was hoping for something a little happier than Honeysuckle. She now knows that Dumbledore is dying, she has Flitwick and Pince offering to help with library recovery work, and yet she's still feeling sorry for herself, playing cards and listening to radio. She needs to snap out of things! Can I beg you for another chapter? Please????? |
absurdwords | 2005.01.03 - 07:26AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
I really like your portrayal of Hermione and Snape. Lovely story. |
Alice_IW | 2005.01.03 - 07:02AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
Beautiful. (Will try to say something more intelligent at a later date.) |
Rainbow | 2005.01.03 - 06:27AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
I don't like these stoies. They're terminally depressing. But I read them anyway, becuause you're a good writer. :( Mean author. Write something a bit happier, for my sake. |
Azazello | 2005.01.03 - 06:17AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
First review happy dance.
Brilliant. Cool, witty and clever. And a highly possible older Hermione. Just great. |
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