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| JoAnNe NiCoLLeTe | 2005.05.24 - 04:39AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| What? WHAT? You fiend! You cannot just leave this here like this! I expect a sequel. Dammit, write a whole bloody epic if you like! I will not stand for this injustice to the readers of this site! They expect finished stories! Oh please, please! This was simply superb! The characterization and descriptions were simply spot-on! Trust Snape to be as nasty as he can pretend to be, and Hermione to poke him just where it hurts (ie. the tracing of the lip of her glass just to annoy him). One of the best fics I've read in a LONG time; your dialogue and sentences just flow, and it makes this such an absolute joy to read. Back to my first complaint, you HAVE to write a sequel. I've never felt so deprived! | |||
| pickles | 2005.05.02 - 11:22PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| Good interesting. maybe there will be more. thank you have a great week patty | |||
| MKane | 2005.04.25 - 11:01PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| Interesting | |||
| arctic_platypus | 2005.04.25 - 04:18PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| i'm torn between wanting more--the characterizations are perfect--and enjoying the stark simplicity. i see a little bit of sylvia plath in there too, brooding and enigmatic. | |||
| droxy | 2005.04.16 - 01:16PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| lovely and bittersweet, this is so loaded with fear of change and longing of two lonely people who don't quite know what to do about what they want to do. waiting for the next short... | |||
| behind | 2005.04.14 - 10:04PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| Monkeygoats! This is a great story. I loveth the plot, and I like the way you put Snapeypoo in it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Just a 'one shot' vignette for this one, I'm afraid. I'm writing the third vignette now, and I should post it sometime within a month or so. Thank you for your review. :) | |||
| MsMoss | 2005.04.06 - 11:45PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| You make me want to write ... which is a good thing :) I don't think things have to be long and extraneous; they can remain in small parts that feel as though they are a greater whole. I enjoy writing vignettes, and your stories inspire me to continue in that style. Smoke and Honeysuckle were quite enjoyable to read, thank you; I very much liked the characterizations and scene-setting. Author's Response: Thank you for your review, MyMoss. I prefer to keep things short - anyone can expound an idea (the writing equivalent of 'why walk when you can cartwheel'), but I think it takes more thought and dedication to take a story and carve away the fat and the extraneous material until it's pared down to meat and bone. Both styles of storytelling have their place, but sparseness is definitely overlooked. Gracious, it sounds like I'm stylistically justifying my fanfiction. I'm not quite that full of myself, honestly. :D | |||
| scienceblinded | 2005.04.06 - 01:00PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Anonymous |
| This could be the start of something big -- if you'd let it... What else have you written and where is it (she demands, tapping toes and fingers)? Thanks again... Author's Response: Fanfiction-wise? Not much apart from the previous vignette to this story ('Honeysuckle') and some absolutely hideous Mary Sues that I had enough common sense to delete without showing anyone. I prefer to remain on the art side of fandom, where I'm prolific bordering on over-productive. :) | |||
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