Reviews for Smoke
| kissthenight | 2005.01.07 - 02:11AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| Nice little extra to Honeysuckle.
She's still bitter and he is, well, Snape.
I won't whine for more installments...I won't....
~gah~
The hell I won't! |
| heartnut | 2005.01.06 - 09:45AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| Oh, this was GREAT. Thanks for continuing the story--I love how vengeful and hurt you've written HG, and SS is spot-on, too. Just how I'd imagine he'd speak to an adult. Keep up the great work! |
| Mrs Alfred | 2005.01.05 - 04:31AM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| I love this series. How wonderful to read a sequel. There is a calm, professional style to your writing, which makes comprehension liquid smooth. :-) I always know who is speaking, why they are, how they feel about it and what they are not saying. Quite a feat.
Hermione's relationship with Severus is kept a perfect pace. I am enjoying this slow, subtle, relationship. It means much more than any animalistic "we happen to be standing near each other: let's shag," stories. My heart melts at the thought of a real friendship, and all these tentitive point-counterpoint-one step back encounters lay the ground work for a relationship that is real.
Your work is excellent, refined and thoughtful. |
| Cenicienta | 2005.01.04 - 05:48PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| It's a great sequel, but I wish the charcters will develop some more. Somenthing more intimate, kind of friendship with a lot of sarcasm... Love your style! |
| Titania | 2005.01.03 - 09:14PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| Man this is so good! You are a brilliant writer, and have kept the two so perfectly in charater! I was a bit disappointed by the way you ended Honeysuckle, but imagine the thrill i felt when I saw this. I hope you will continue it.
Live long and prosper, Titania
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| queenp | 2005.01.03 - 06:10PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| *sniff* Poor Hermione--her library in ashes....Dumbledore so ill...*sniff*
Well done. I like the story. I hope you would consider yet another "companion piece" as this is so well done. |
| Dog Girl | 2005.01.03 - 03:10PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| Excellent! I really, really like everyone's raw edges in your writing. Change is *hard* - and these two have never struck me as easily having that ability. Thanks! |
| Black Aliss | 2005.01.03 - 12:04PM | 1: A development of sorts. | Signed |
| Well..this is just great! (hey, I can be snarky too!)..I just love the
mature Hermoine (although she is a trifle too angst-y) and a perfectly lovely Snape; ill at ease with real people and very snarky.. I just really get into the descriptions and dialogs and the
!story line!...and what do you do but end it! Shame on you!
(I'm trying a one minute manager thing here..work with me!) Now
pleeeze write some more chapters. You are onto to good of a story to quit. You have a great background town..the perfect setting for Hermoine, and of course..Dumbledor's pending death..
and Harry..What about Harry!? You gotta do more!! |
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