Reviews for Dances With Witches
MollysSister | 2006.04.12 - 11:39AM | 26: Lesson Nine: Lessons Learned or Arrrgh! | Signed |
When Severus walks Hermione to the apperation point she calls him a "pick" short for pickle? Or were you going for "prick"?
I made a rather large snort noise when Edmund fainted. Ha!
Author's Response: Pick may not have been the best choice of words, I meant pick as in 'choose'.
“I have every intention of shagging you within an inch of you life. You pick, before or after your lesson. See you Wednesday.” I think Edmund was in shock, he did manage to recover, though. |
shaded_rose | 2005.02.19 - 07:08AM | 26: Lesson Nine: Lessons Learned or Arrrgh! | Signed |
well, im still loving it! carry on writing! im looking forward to the halloween dance and love the use of descriptie language! especially the lemons! lol. jeep it up! |
Maddie | 2005.02.17 - 01:19AM | 26: Lesson Nine: Lessons Learned or Arrrgh! | Signed |
I am really enjoying your story. Very creative, informative, sexy, funny, etc. I started reading yesterday and ran out of chapters this evening. I hope you update soon. Great work! |
StormAZ | 2005.02.14 - 04:04PM | 26: Lesson Nine: Lessons Learned or Arrrgh! | Signed |
OMG!! Finally finished chapter 26 ... I got so into the story, I couldn't stop reading. For possibly the first time in several years, I'm almost glad I caught up with you!! Almost ^_~ But after an all-nighter and most of the day so far, I think it's about time to give up for now ^_~ I will definetly be back to read any updates for htis one!! |
vamp4ever | 2005.02.09 - 06:21PM | 26: Lesson Nine: Lessons Learned or Arrrgh! | Signed |
you are a fabulous writer. keep it coming. I just love your Severus; he is close to true, but so much more. |
Armor | 2005.02.09 - 04:30PM | 26: Lesson Nine: Lessons Learned or Arrrgh! | Signed |
The end was so funny ! The poor guy fainted ! Yes ! But I can't wait for the show at Hogwarts ! I'm sure the students will be frightened to see their horrible potion maters like this.
Keep the good work |
Winna | 2005.02.07 - 09:15AM | 26: Lesson Nine: Lessons Learned or Arrrgh! | Signed |
Heh. I loved the commotion Severus caused at the seminar. Obviously Rancine thought he was about to be attacked; makes me wonder what history there is between the two men. I liked Edmund's fainting spell, too. And the image of crowds parting before an imposing Severus was also great. Looking forward to updates... |
Kaylee | 2005.02.07 - 08:20AM | 26: Lesson Nine: Lessons Learned or Arrrgh! | Signed |
hahaha oh my thud hahahahahaha |
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