Reviews for Dances With Witches
| StormDragonfly | 2013.10.05 - 09:37PM | 12: Sunday at Hogwarts: Act Two – And the Band Played On | Signed |
| Continuity issues raising their head in this one. Hermione kissed Severus, not the other way around. And He asks her out on a date during the next week twice. The first time she says yes, the second time she says she's too busy but they can order a pizza with their lesson. And the same joke is made twice about Hermione wanting his library instead of his good looks.
I do like to see them in an honest relationship, but I was surprised that it happened so quickly. With the dance at Halloween, the conference in November, and the Christmas potion brewing plans set up, I just expecting the attraction to be drawn out a bit longer. Though I like the idea that people already know they've started seeing each other when they do the dance. |
| joan_glover | 2013.05.03 - 10:54AM | 12: Sunday at Hogwarts: Act Two – And the Band Played On | Signed |
| Although your research and reasoning are more clear, Bambu in "Calling Card" gives Severus a birthday in March. I recommend her story if you haven't read it already. I, myself, am a Scorpio, and I see the traits Serverus and I have in common. Thanks for making him a Scorpio! |
| verasuspense | 2009.02.26 - 06:40PM | 12: Sunday at Hogwarts: Act Two – And the Band Played On | Signed |
| I think you left a word or two out of the recipe: What does "the bread into three slices each " mean? And wouldn't it make more sense to put the raisins on top of the bread or between two layers of bread? |
| Soul Bound | 2006.09.23 - 05:54PM | 12: Sunday at Hogwarts: Act Two – And the Band Played On | Signed |
| So how does it factor in now that we know that Sev's birthday is the 9th of January? I wonder.... |
| Arime Setta | 2006.06.19 - 09:42PM | 12: Sunday at Hogwarts: Act Two – And the Band Played On | Signed |
| I love the story so far. It is funny and romantic. I almost passed it by (well, I passed it by a handful of times because Severus and the Tango seemed odd but of course turned out to be a devilishly sexy mix) but when I came across it on the multifaceted page I had to read it. Congrats on having won the award (ages ago I'm sure but I'm new to the awards). Love it! Arime |
| luvery | 2005.07.24 - 09:25PM | 12: Sunday at Hogwarts: Act Two – And the Band Played On | Signed |
| Actually, I read somewhere (I think hp-lexicon.org) that Ms Rowling had said that Snape's birthday is the 9th of January. Which makes him a Capricorn. Which makes him PERFECT for Hermione. In Chinese zodiac Snape's a Earth Pig (like me! well, i'm water...) and Hermione's a Earth Goat and again good together (though the personalities they are supposed to have in consequence don't really match...)!
Pity about HBP... *sigh*
Oh and like this fic! Uh-huh, I do I do! |
| behind | 2005.06.20 - 02:22AM | 12: Sunday at Hogwarts: Act Two – And the Band Played On | Signed |
| actually, Severus was born on January 9, 1978. He will be exactly 37 years old in the 6th book. Meh.. I'm such a freak. |
| Satoni | 2005.03.17 - 06:51PM | 12: Sunday at Hogwarts: Act Two – And the Band Played On | Signed |
| This story is unbelievable.... I just adore it !!!
I can't wait to find the time to continue the reading
Love you for your writing..... :x |
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